Commander Vorak
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Post by Commander Vorak on Jul 21, 2007 0:49:45 GMT
The Endeavour, The USS Hibrina, USS Columbia and USS Valiant are assigned a dangerous mission, to split up and scout deep into Drengin space, while inside the drengins home nebula near federation space the Endeavour is attacked by the drengin many times, after fleeing or fighting off the drengin patrols they finaly locate a forward outpost, droping its weak shields and boarding it they take its command center and hack into its main computer. After some digging they learn of a dark secret... a Doom looming on the horizon...
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Post by Rudger McVanlen on Jul 21, 2007 1:13:30 GMT
XD yay! lol hope its a good one.
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Post by Beathan MacAinmire on Jul 21, 2007 12:40:15 GMT
That's Looks Like A Job For...CLARK! Not Kent that is. I mean the engennire. Our guy.
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Daniel Clark
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Post by Daniel Clark on Jul 21, 2007 16:33:30 GMT
YAY
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Post by Rudger McVanlen on Jul 21, 2007 21:55:01 GMT
I did notice something though. You have only 3 ships and of differint classes. Its your progitive to change stuff but my idea was for 4 Excelsior ships to go in as the scout force. Since they are the fastist starfleet has and are well armed enough to hold their own. just wondering why you changed it.
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Commander Vorak
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Post by Commander Vorak on Jul 21, 2007 22:09:40 GMT
Because I made the art first and then relised
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Post by Rudger McVanlen on Jul 21, 2007 22:26:26 GMT
Ohhh well fine then lol.
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Post by Beathan MacAinmire on Jul 21, 2007 22:57:59 GMT
talking about your art...did you notis the the ship in the senter has a purple glow in the midle of its body...and the right nasel is detached from the Endy.
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Commander Vorak
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Post by Commander Vorak on Jul 21, 2007 23:35:00 GMT
Oh shush lol
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Post by Rudger McVanlen on Jul 24, 2007 20:51:01 GMT
As a note its not the kind of nebula you have to worry about entering. The Drengin live in them and theres entire worlds in them.
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Commander Vorak
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Post by Commander Vorak on Jul 29, 2007 2:20:54 GMT
Alright ive moved it on, as usual it seems im the only who bothers to get things going *sigh*
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Post by Beathan MacAinmire on Jul 29, 2007 12:51:30 GMT
Well I'm only a doctor. And thers a plot that I can't change, so its not like I could come in and said "We are all going to die cause of a deadly viruse!" So I'm limited.
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Commander Vorak
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Post by Commander Vorak on Jul 29, 2007 20:57:29 GMT
No not you SOME people have decided their own sites are more interesting and stopped bothering
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Post by Rudger McVanlen on Jul 29, 2007 21:54:31 GMT
Well i keep checking the sites but nowone will post on any of them. I just wish yall would post on AW, Endy, Hibrina, Valerious clan, and my new Babylon 5 rpg. But nooooooo nowone wants to rp on the cool sites XD.
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Commander Vorak
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Post by Commander Vorak on Jul 30, 2007 0:10:25 GMT
Indeed I was away for a couple of days and no progress was made anywhere
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