Upon Crystal Waves - Good Or Bad?

[luno]

Please Back Up Your Vote With Feedback. This Is So I Can Know Where I Stand, As I Plan To Write A Few More Episodes.

[Commander Vorak]

Ill go for the not bad one. Good but we have had better, i'm syure the next time you will get the chance to expand your ideas.

[zepplin]

Look it did start as a good idea, but I just thought that it needd to be put into solid concrete before deciding in the middle of it a couple of important things, like blighs rank, how the aliens were trapped, that sort of thing, and I thought it went way too fast, and the sub-plot with the Captain and Jade and Litch (Litch 'was' there right?) never went anywhere, and I think that would've been a good breather from the main plot. But it was certainly too fast, like in a couple of hours bligh had already escaped again and got himself killed, and I was like, damn! because there was so much I wanted to add inbetween his escape to further our characters, well mostly mine, but my relationship with bligh at least anyway, but you know, there have certainly been worse ones, so it wasn't that bad overall

[Commander Vorak]

The sub plot didn't happen due to the Captains absense

[Captain Alexander Kynes]

Too bad I wasn't able to join in on that episode. It was only really a way to make an end to Tom Bligh's character, but I hope you guys enjoyed it.