Blinded

[Commander Vorak]

We can do this next if Bethan hasn't managed to get more time on his machine (which he requested we wait for for his episode), and the one after if he does.

The Endeavour heads toward the dilithium Utaur Mining colony to aid in experiments. The Dilithium seems to be showing strange readings as does the fluid covered plant body. After scanning in detail Vorak discovers that the fluid is alive, a species. The mining station however is important to the sector and the federation and the miners say they have no intention of packing up and stopping. With no aid from starfleet either the crew of the Endeavour must stand up for life themselves, standing between the miners and the Krelak.

[zepplin]

I love every word bar one; Krelak.

Essentially this sounds fine, I don't fully understand "the fluid covered plant body" but im sure that will be explained as we go, I would like to suggest that we do this episode as maybe the twelth? Yes XII, so that XI can be Bligh's Episode... If everyone else thinks we should do that too of course.

[Lt Matina Jade]

Agreed

[zepplin]

Ok, since Episode XI is coming to a close, and also, since the Skipper is going to be away for a while, would you mind letting all the details of this episode be known?

Like for one thing, I seriously don't get how...

A. These are Krelek (do they 'really' have to be Krelek? can't we just not have them be Kre'lek?)

B. The plant thing makes sense... well it doesn't really to me

C. are we going to fit the Captain's absense into the episode?

It sounds good in general, but the description is a little bit vague at the moment.

[luno]

I think the Krelek is a cool thing, as they are an original species.

[Commander Vorak]

the Krelak are at this point still fluid like the unformed changlings and being killed by the miners, its gives us chance to write in a nice moral story that gene would be proud of. Also I think since he is back more Bethans episode should be first.

[zepplin]

Oh ok, well, just in case, after he asks him and he says no, could we have a small plot description. So the Krelek, are more primitive at the moment, this being roughly 80-90 years prior to the Phoenix, and this is still in the time when we are mining them, that much got through. And; we go there and try to stop the mining, although its against orders, is that right? I'm sorry, you probably gave a good description, I just wasn't sure if I interpreted right

[luno]

Alright, let's start and see where is goes.

[Commander Vorak]

We basicly find teh life but the miners and starfleet refuse to stop the mining so we act against orders.

[Beathan MacAinmire]

I just realized that this sound just like "Devil in the Dark"