Murder she wrote

[Lt Matina Jade]

Im guessing this will be in the new season since the last one will be episode 15 I think which ive been told is already writtern but here goes...

Jade is on her toes as a murder is comitted aboard the ship, she must find out who did it and why. Her number one suspect are two alien stoleways who they are carrying. And the plost get thicker by the day.

[Beathan MacAinmire]

I like the Title, it reminds me of an old show. But yeah that would be agreat idea for a mission.

[zepplin]

Oh yeah, that old show "Murder, She Wrote." I somehow thin it will be a bit different to that show, but its a good idea none the less, we might need a sub-plot for some of us though, like a mechanical upgrade or problem at the same time, maybe you could think of that?

[Beathan MacAinmire]

And give you a chance to teak control of the Mission? Jade Leave it the way it is. It chould be a character developer, thus only folowing you.

[zepplin]

What's your problem Nick? I mean seriously, what is it?

Before my idea was rudely dismissed by Nick, I would like to re-iterate that Your plot is perfectly fine, I like the idea, and never said I wanted to change it in any way shape or form, nor would I have reason too, nor would I expect you to let me if it were unreasonable.

I was merely saying, that many of the other characters may not have as much involvement in this particular plot, so if there could be some side-plot, perhaps the word 'sub' is not quite the correct word for that meaning, a 'side'-plot, where the other characters are still doing something at the same time, that would not be there to disrupt, or even interact on any large scale with your plot, if at all, so that the other characters that will not be used in your plot will have something to do during the course of the mission.

I had to spell that out, just incase Nick thinks that the devils work is at play here, which as I have now clearly stated, is far from the case.

[Beathan MacAinmire]

Every 'sidplot' You hade in my Missions endid up YOu teaking control, and directing. Thats MY problem. If Jade wahnts that to be the mission, Then Thats the mission. End Of Story.

[zepplin]

No your being tottaly unreasonable, and assuming the worst, now if you care to read anything I said above, you will see that this is not the case, I never made a side-plot in yours or jeffs story, I wanted to fix the core of it, this is different, I have no problem with this because its a straight forward idea that I have no objections too, (refer to above), yet in saying that, it would limit the interactions of the other characters greatly, as about 75% of them would have nothing to input into an almost soley jade episode, so I was suggesting that AT THE SAME TIME, if it has to be spelt out for you Nick, we have another plot going on AT THE SAME TIME, NOT interacting with her plot in a large way, if AT ALL, so stop using the same one liners again and again, and start actually reading what people put in OOC thread posts, because if you write the exact same reply to this message so help me god I will be very angry.

[Commander Vorak]

I agree but a mission that will involve eveyone not one for just the opps and engineering department as you surjested.

[Beathan MacAinmire]

You still srewed with my missions and my plots, when you shouldent have.

[Commander Vorak]

I am im guessing that aimed at connor and my post was just ignored

[Beathan MacAinmire]

Sorry about that sir. OK so a secondary plot. What if we do charater bilders epis, where the main character(The one being bult) posts in 1st person. And everyone posts in 3rd. So we stil have that 'Its all about them' feal but its still a mission for all.

[zepplin]

Well I'm not sure if the 1st person is needed for Jade, I pressume her posts will be the largest and of course the most significant, but I'm guessing that she'll need her from other characters, otherwise shes writting the entire mission on her own, so perhaps Jade, you could consider assigning players with characters in your story as well as have us post on our own sort of character developments, that might help you out a little.
And I think it should be up to Jade exactly the nature of the side-plot for this episode, as in, does she want the ship to be at a starbase or a planet, and all those small details that can be put into the Briefing, so its very clear cut the nuts and bolts of the mission, while still giving us room to post at the same time

[Beathan MacAinmire]

I dont understand what you mean with the 'assigning players with characters' Maybe Jade is faster at understanding it then me but, still I'd like to understand it.

[Commander Vorak]

I thing he ment roles. Anyway the first person wouldnt work because we couldnt have a side plot.

[Beathan MacAinmire]

Why not? Jade would post 1st, giving use what she is thinking & fealing. And the rest of use just posting in 3rd.Ex:

Jade:
I walked down the corridor, thinking about who did it, and why. I had some suspects but nothing was sertan. I was so consern about the case I didnt notice bethan walking untill we colided.

Beathan:
Beathan was walking down the coridor. sudenly him and Jade colide. "I'm so sorry miss."


Somthing like that. But if you dont like it its ok. It was just an idea.