Mind over matter/ Murder she wrote

[Commander Vorak]

It has come to my attention two things:

1) both plots limit the stories to focus on one or two persons and not much else. Both need a side story to go on during it all.

2) The season will end with episode 15 and that episode is already written by Kynes months ago.

Therefore it but it forward to combine the episode ideas and the captains hints like so:

The Endeavor pick up its captain from a system on the verge of destroying itself. Why working in the system trying to prevent such a thing the Endeavour receives a distress call from a Valen escape pod that has been traveling for weeks after its mother ship was destroyed in a near by system. After picking them up and helping with the doctors fine care a murder occurs on board and the Valens are prime suspects as are perhaps spys. During the murder investigation Ms Juliet Snow is in the wrong place at the wrong time and hears something she wasn't meant to. Before she can tell anyone she is attacked and although saved by Beathan she is set in a deep coma from a head wound. With no other orthodox options Vorak and a mind meld is her only hope. They soon discover the Valen and the alien war are not in the same area by coincidence.

[Beathan MacAinmire]

Its brilliant!

[zepplin]

Wow, that is a truely fantastic way to tie all three ideas together, lets finally get the Captain back onboard and do this thing!

Everything is perfect timing, I mean most of you guys are going on summer holidays, we are going on winter over here, and they are all converging at the perfect time to end one season and start the next, we all need to be posting at 101% to pick it all up again.

and on the Phoenix too boys and girls, its shocking that no ones checking it, go check if your a member, because the mission is back on a roll!

[Beathan MacAinmire]

3? I only count 2...could you point them out Conor? Pleas and thankyou!

[zepplin]

The Murder, the knock of the head and karls idea, into one episode, thats 1,2 and 3. Just have a re-check what karl said and im sure you'll get what I mean.

[Rudger McVanlen]

thats a great idea karl. Also when are we doing the secend episode of my drengin arc? 1st episode of next season or???

[Commander Vorak]

If you post it up as an idea then yeah

[Rudger McVanlen]

ok, i will get started on it ASAP.

[Beathan MacAinmire]

Ah yes ! Thatnk you Conor, I hatend realy notised. I thought it was part of Juliets Idea. I realy have to reread some times.

[zepplin]

Oh also, by the 'alien war' your refering to the planet in which Kynes is on correct? and by co-incidence, you mean that they have something to do with it correct?

[Rudger McVanlen]

damn conor, i started with a 200-300 post lead not long ago and your like 12 posts away... you post way to much. and yes i think its cear that he means the planet kynes is on, and that the valens have something to do with it.

[Commander Vorak]

10 points for Ruger

[Beathan MacAinmire]

I want ten points...>_>*Glair*

[zepplin]

Its more like 20, and also, we are all sort of dependant on the Captain here, he has come on today, but does anyone actually know if he plans to put in 110% like everyone else is? or even post at all? because over late may and up untill now Con has been busy with something else (I forget what) I'm interested if anyone has had the chance to catch up with him.

[Commander Vorak]

Indeed, he has told me he has alot of shit on atm so I can understand. Fact is thow if its to do with his band or gf they are poor excuses. I have a girfreind I see everyday, college as well as other stuff but I always make time. He says he has good excuses I just dotn see how he has time to pm me but not to post on the episode.